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Night-time Passion

The moon and the stars,
are shining their light,
to guild those souls,
through the shadows of night.

The cool damp breeze,
brings a warm delight.
to all those who enjoy,
the darkness of night

It soars on the wings,
it is those creatures of night.
They are bringing the mystery,
to the hour of midnight.

Nighttime brings mystery,
it brings romance and fright
It brings new experience's
During the hour of starlight.

Author notes

this was for homework for English class and i thought i did good on it and i thought i would post it.
Written September 8th, 2005

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  • Neko
    October 18, 2005
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    Thank you!

  • Within Da Soul
    September 8, 2005
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    This piece is very good. Very deep, and deeply thought out.