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My Wall

If I could make this one decision,
I would make the world stop spinning.
Then make a wall of rocks and stones to make a division
To stop everyone from seeing what I am feeling.

When can I stop this cold-hearted depression,
So I can put and end to my and screaming.
What madness have I contracted to make such an assimilation
Of all my years of pain and suffering.

Author notes

I kinda went suicidal the other day.
Written September 6th, 2005

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