Let me show you the way to my room
as I unveil my red dress
the one that was stolen from a virgin and dyed with her blood
I lay my gentlemen prey on the bed for I am ready for my dinner
he only laughs as I tie him up on the bedposts
as I give fellatio all he can do is smile and ask me where I got my tongue
I look at him out of frustration and figure it's time
I retrieve the knife and he says it's cute
I deep throat for a few strokes and he starts to explode
as he climaxes for the last big bust I cut it off
he screams and cries asking me why
then I tear his hands free and kick him out
watching him scream running away like a little boy
but thinking carefree for now it's my turn to cum as I jump on the bed
Author notes
touch-a touch-a touch me
Written September 8th, 2005
A contest entry
- Bring me your erotica!! All welcome! by stormy angel.
300 points, ended October 3, 2005, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OW! That is really a dark poem as well as erotic. Really good though. I just hope you really didn't do that to someone. lol. Just kidding. Great Job
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What a Joke
Wow this was really horrible. Not so much the writing, but the image of course is extremely twisted.
I assume the woman is some sort of sadistic-whorish-vampire. I think the poem needs a lot of work, because it seemeed very cheesy. And the ending that should have been explosive wasn't as imaginative as you could have pushed it there honey. You cut off a Dick...all you can do is cumm?!
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well... that definately gave me an image i wont soon forget... damn... excellent writing... i just dont know what else to say abotu this. except maybe ow?
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wow that is very good also kind of dark. Great poem keep up the good work.
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whoa does she do wat i think she does in this poem! LOL.. interesting...
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This was cute, sexy, and dark all in one I like it
nice job on this guse you know what happens if you dont get your first or at all lol thanks for reading one of my poems that means a lot lots of love Robin...aka SH
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SYou have a great way of putting an image into someones head! I really like this one, I hope you win........Good Luck! ~val~
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It was very interesting. I enjoyed the imagery you used. Very nice.
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this made me laugh!!!!!!!! i like it!!!! it was hot and very naughty!!
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Thank you. I can only try my best.
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This is awesome. I like this and good luck in the contest, friend. You write expertly.
Lestat de LaRose
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