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So In Love

I'm so in love
With the man of my dreams
When you look into my eyes
You see them start to beam
He makes me so happy
When he holds me so tight
He makes me feel loved
He just makes me feel so right
I've never been so happy
The way that I am right now
I know you see it Sara
When you are around
I want him to be my husband
To death do us part
I had a good feeling
Right from the start

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Written September 8th, 2005

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  • Jason Logan
    September 9, 2005
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    Incredible Work

    Hats off Shades girl this is awesome! I wish I were able to keep that sort of love up for a while, enough to enjoy it. Congrats on Second place, I wish you the best with your guy, hes so lucky!

  • Dannysgurl
    September 8, 2005
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    wow this is really good...I know the feeling good luck with you to I hope you guys end up like me and danny well not prego!


  • TwiztedAndAlone
    September 8, 2005
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    YAY BRITTANY! I love this so much...and you USED MY NAME! YAY! hehe...You rock babe, and I am so happy for you that you're so in love! Stay strong babe and hang in there and you'll always be happy! I LOVE YOU!

    twizted bizkit