The search,the journey,
The quest for inner peace,
The curiosity,the eagerness,
The beginning,the end,
All paths lead to the question,
Who am I?
The supreme Divine Nature,
The eternal spirit benign,
Born and mothered by her blessings,
Learnt the baby steps forward,
And other destined notions.
Smashed to smithereens,
Unraveling my own identity,
Ventured beyond the realm of reality,
With nature,I am born again.
A contest entry
- Abstract poetry.... 500 points ... PW allowed. by Manoj Sanyal.
500 points, ended March 23, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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a poem with depth....
Thanks for your participation.
Good luck,
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Ah..you took me too with your journey..very deep and very innovative as well...thanks for sharing it and goodluck in my contest..
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I like the lay out of this poem it seems sound and is enticing to read. The poem is on an interesting subject that we all question our self and like how the writer begins to understand her/his self and how there for s/he is then born again. I like the simplicity of this poem paired with vivid images and metaphors. Well done this is a nice piece.
Illiterate Iguana.
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Your peoem has a calming effect, though it entails the sundering of old ideas. It is soothing and promotes contemlation. Thanks. Beautifully written.
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woooooooooooooow ! this is just sooooooo great ! thank you very much for this wonderful entry and best wishes in the contest !
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TRUTHWRITER -
this was a great piece. it was deep, and i like the fact that it was SO different from the other poems entered into my contest. good work. keep it up.
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Nice. Thank you for entering.
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Sincere thanks for appreciation.
Mental thought then keyed .. yes.
Best wishes,
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Deep 'n' Thoughtful
I very much enjoyed this piece. You combine several concepts in this piece which I myself can relate to-- the questions of what we are, the oneness we all share with the Spirit and the universe, and the deconstruction of reality through self-discovery. Very well penned (or keyed, as it were ). Thank you for your entry, and good luck!
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Thank you very much for liking the poem.
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splendid
well, i can't but say an easter soul is breathing between the lines... very deep and insaightful piece... loved it very much. i am going to read the rest of your poems... keep up! -
Sincere thanks for your appreciation.
Best wishes for happy times.
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This was a wonderfully uplifting read first thing in the morning for me
Smashed to smithereens
I love your use of this line and it's placement in the poem. You did a wonderful job weaving language that is common to many into something different and musical in nature. Very nice
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THANKS!!
Best wishes,
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Thanks mina for appreciation.
Enjoy your day.
musafir -
This is very insightful and philosophical poem you’ve penned… I often wonder the meaning of life and purpose…it seems you’ve found the answer… your poem is beautifully worded… Good luck in the contest…
mina
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