Maybe you're the one
That I like to lean on
The one that tells me truths
And snaps me out of it
Maybe you're the one
That annoys me to no end
The one that's hot and cold
As apple pie with ice-cream
Maybe you're the one
Who I have an 'undefinable relationship wtih
The one that just makes me laugh
Or maybe your just one
I like to be around
Author notes
Hey guys, Hugs for all (I expect one back (If that hasn't sent you running I don't know what will)) Just a bit of general appriation for ALL (and I mean ALL) my friends, I mean some of you have good poems about you... a few have some... negative ones(PAST NOW!), but this is for EVERYONE!
Lets Host Contests
Written September 8th, 2005
A contest entry
- The Ode Contest(PLEASE Click Wisely) by Raazi.
400 points, ended May 28, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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hehehe! Contests!
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so's you know jimmy, noah gave me all his points
(contest time)...lol. Not sure which I am... most likely the kind that annoys you to no end hehe.
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apple pie and cream
sounds like a pregnancy craving 
oh here ya go 
good luck in the contest this is pretty good I like how you thought of your friends right.
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yay for friends
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well I thought about it and everyone in the group fits into at least one of those. though some inspired the line in the first place so yes there are some subtle neon lights. Thanks.
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'your' to 'you're' in every first line of the stanza, 'anouys' to 'annoys', 'The one thats hot' to 'that's', 'undefiable realaationship wtih' to 'undefinable relationship with' But other than that, nicely put, and I think everyone is finally glad to hear one about them, although I can't help but think there are some subtle neon lights flashing above the heads of people I think some of this is aimed at lol
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sure.
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thanks.
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hey, hey, am I your friend? *big puppy-dog-eyed grin*
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awe..hugs...i love it ..thank you ......you rock
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