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the reaper

i am the reaper of your dreams
i am the plotter of evil schemes
i will eat your soul and break your mind
there is only one of my kind
i am the all knowing, all seeing
unspeakable type of being
my shadow casts on open eyes
i can see deep with-in threw all the lies
your soul is now mine for the taking
your will to live is mine for the breaking
you thought life was a bitch till it was time for pay back
to bad you never thought you would met the devil dressed in black
here to eat your soul each and ever day till the end of time
what you thought you would get holy death and buried with lime ?
not in this day in age where the rat is feasted upon in the cage  
no matter how much you fight and hate me with all your rage
i shall watch you die day after day with my jokers smile
i am the king of night i am ruler from the heavens to the Nile
i am the dark ruler of the night the one no one heard of but all knew
in due time i will come to see you\*

Author notes

this is a poem about death no matter what we all see it in due time, no one can escape it or flee it it happens to all of us...... it sick and twisted.
Written September 8th, 2005

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  • Word
    May 27, 2006
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    I loved the personifiction going on here. Intense, raw decriptions.
    thanks for the read

  • Tamas
    November 7, 2005
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    Sick and twisted-u can say that again!
    Honestly, this was scarey- your words scared me!Tamas.


  • BareBeast
    September 8, 2005
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    nice poem. Great rythem and very deep. loved it!

  • DeadAngel1700
    September 8, 2005
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    Goddamn....i fucking liked this poem. Call me the weird girl but thats some shit I could seriously get off fantasizing about. Other than that great work, clear detail...a little repetetive but its part of the points you're making. Great write keep going!