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Winter Prelude (Haiku)


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scarlet sumac
autumn speaks in color
winter in hue

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Written September 7th, 2005

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  • DawnBaby
    September 9, 2005
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    Thank You

    Thanks so much skinwalker, I so appreciate your kind comments, are you having fun yet? I would hate to have to pick from this contest, I read all entries last night, whew! Great contest, thanks so much for focusing on Haiku, helps to practice!

  • skinwalker 2
    September 9, 2005
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    good luck in the contest

    I think your haiku just keeps getting better each time you write and I really like your pureness with words and thats my opinion. Thanks for sharing with us.Skinwalker


  • DawnBaby
    September 8, 2005
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    Thank you

    Thanks so much for your review of my haiku, I appreciate your time and comments. Thanks for the encouragement.


  • DawnBaby
    September 8, 2005
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    Thank You

    Thank you so much for your kind review, so glad you liked it!
    Appreciate your comments and review!


  • Rejected Freak
    September 7, 2005
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    So little words can say so much...you really have to re-read this a few times over before getting the feeling. This could mean many things from simple to complex...normally i dont like haikus because there so short and have no meaning but this one really did Good work


  • UnchartedPoet
    September 7, 2005
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    I do love this poems, they are just perfect...beautiful passage from autumn to winter; very simple spoken words that bring up so much image of color with just the word "autumn" and with that word knowing winter will be right around the corner.....I hope I got it, or that is what I am taking from this piece, I will get them sooner or later.... but for now I will just enjoy reading them, thanks for sharing

    Jen

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