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The Making of a Villanelle


The first line always goes right here

You must choose well each clever word

The third line's here - now, ain't that clear?


The first lines now that will appear

Rhyme with 1st stanza's first and third

The first line always goes right here.


All middle lines must rhyme, my dear,

Although it may sound quite absurd

The third line's here - now, ain't that clear?


Five 3-line stanzas shall appear

With rhymes in place as was inferred

The first line always goes right here.


One 4-line verse brings up the rear

The proper style is now insured

The third line's here - now, ain't that clear?


So take it from the Balladeer

Of villanelles you now have heard

The first line always goes right here

The third line's here - now, ain't that clear?

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Written September 7th, 2005

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  • SighsLongingly
    October 9, 2005
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    Noble Peace Prize

    Succinct tutorial, had my eyes swirling back to recap that derived. Would apreciate being Quizzed to determine my 1st comprehension's accuraccy*. (why waste time, this, being the now)
    *asking Balladeer post haste


  • Balladeer
    September 24, 2005
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    thank you very much, starhiker...I'm glad you found it helpful


  • Starhiker
    September 24, 2005
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    Hey, I'm gonna refer people to this poem tutoring writing villanelle poems! It's very descriptive, and the coloring helps too. Good rhyming and flow. Excellent work!


  • DamnUnique
    September 18, 2005
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    WOW! This is so clever and ingenious! I'm glad I read this 'informative' poem because I just recently tried a Villanelle and I'm planning to write more too
    This was a truly great write and explains the entire writing of a Villanelle in a very wonderful way! AMAZING!
    Thank you so much for sharing this work and do keep writing


  • klassy lassy
    September 13, 2005
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    What a challenge! I've been looking at villanelles for a while and love to read them. I think I'd better print this out if I'm ever to try my hand at one. Thank you, Mike!


  • abernaith
    September 13, 2005
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    A most clever instruction.


  • SomethingDelicate gold member
    September 11, 2005
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    This is so cute and could be used as a tool by creative writing teachers everywhere, and a good reference for anyone who wishes to write a villanelle.


  • xquisite
    September 11, 2005
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    this was really good, and i think the colours helped a great deal. some one can really learn from this... i liked it

  • Ankeeta silver member
    September 11, 2005
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    hehe what a creativity ..I'm gonna bookmark this .....I appreciate to think to write about its "making"!! lol....nice work here

    Ankita


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 11, 2005
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    Takes abit of time to get all this right, I think. Sure explains the poem form, that's for sure. Interesting and unusual. Thanks.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    September 11, 2005
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    I HATE ain't, INNIT?


  • Blazing White Wolf
    September 11, 2005
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    now this is very clever and yes you made a villanelle the colors where a bit distracting but well done
    love and light
    blaze


  • Jaden silver member
    September 11, 2005
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    hey, not bad.


  • malkinpuss
    September 11, 2005
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    Very clever!

  • roscoe-86
    September 11, 2005
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    wow thats cool. very clever of you. i really liked this and its simple. not anything you have to struggle to figure out. nice job.


  • catz Moderators member
    September 11, 2005
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    What a cool way to explain the construction of a poem type. Maybe I'll try one of these after all
    Amazing, Michael, you're so creative. This is really a helpful post...and humorous as well

    Thanks a bunch
    Big
    Dee

  • Munda
    September 10, 2005
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    Superb

    This is extraordinary! Who else but you could write such an educative Villanelle? Kewl how you used the colours to give it an additional explanation. I bet you'll see Villanelles appear on the site after people read this.

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