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The Guardian Fairy


THE GUARDIAN FAIRY

 

Twila is guardian of a hidden kingdom
beneath fallen leaves on the garden floor
it opens through an old fallen tree
never seen by man is this tiny door


The little fairies are small and quick
They roam the forest at night unseen
Twila the guardian protects them all
From dangers lurking in the forest green

Twila flies high above the darkened forest
With her spear she watching constantly
Warning others when there is danger
If needed she will strike most violently

Her spirit full of enchantment and wonder
She has life everlasting she can not die
Honored by all of those that she rules
They are captivated by one look in her eyes

Her magnificent beauty surpasses no other
Chosen to be the guardian and the queen
Ruling over her tiny kingdom in the forest
For thousands of year too tiny to be seen



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Written September 7th, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    March 4, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thanks a bunch for the wonderful comment. Hugs to you. Take care, Sandy


  • neoladyem
    March 4, 2006
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    This superb work. You really have it down. I loved how magical creature procet one of other. I can just imagine it so in your poem. This is really great.


  • shubs
    October 2, 2005
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    This was sweet and the pic sweeter and the poem the sweetest..
    so cute and so angelic==Shubs
    with her spear she watching constantly=with her spear she is watching constantly


  • iwishuponastar14
    September 8, 2005
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    Thank you for entering my contest sandygram!!!
    this poem was very good.I loved how it rhymes and the details.And that the fairy is a guardian..is not commonly seen!! i loved it very much!
    good luck in my contest!
    xoxox
    kayla