Sunset
The begining of life
Life of the damned
Forsaken nomades of times lost
Rejected mystiques of misunderstanding
The fall of Aten is their only salvation
As the pale light teases over their skin
The eyes of ages lost
Echo within bleeding hearts
A tear, a cry, and a plead for redemption
Is consumed by insanity
Madness that washes over the land
With each coming
Sunrise
Author notes
Written January 14th, 2003
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i never really looked at a sunrise in that way. But this really made me think. It's like the sunrise is the begining it brings us out and builds up this false hope and we are consumed by insanity and the sun sets and it's over, then the sun rises and it's back to the asylum..... sorry just my thoughts
this was an awsome piece... i liked how much it made me think
*hugs*
liz
