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Around.

Around and around,
we go once again.
We've done this a million times.

You and me both already know,
what it feels like to be alone.
So just meet me half way,
I know you want more then this.
And this is what we get for wanting more.

Don't rope me down,
Just ask the questions.
And fantasize about the future.

No ones every ready for the moment that they
"Live for."
mistakes bring use round robin,
once again.

You will always bring a smile to my lips.
And tears to my eyes.
But this confusion will eventually end.
And hopefully you'll still be there.
Whether i need you or not.

But please don't trip and fall,
over my past mess.
I don't plan on picking that one up.
Just leave it as is,
and forget it.

These words bring us around and around.
once again.

Don't drown in my sea.
Wear it all on your sleeve,
and crack a halfwit smile.

You think so highly of me,
Its such a surprise.
I've never had this before.
This time I'll lay n your arms,
and let you take control.
But please,
please don't go and come around and around like you have before.

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Um, i really dont know.
Written September 7th, 2005

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  • September 7, 2005
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    This is amazing. I'm slightly confused as to what it's about, but I think I have an idea. Nevertheless, it had me drawn in straight away.

    "You will always bring a smile to my lips.
    And tears to my eyes."

    I can relate BIG time to that. I enjoyed reading this piece heaps, great job! Take care.