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sunburn 
Written September 7th, 2005
A contest entry
- Do you Haiku ?? by skinwalker 2.
1000 points, ended September 10, 2005, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great write!
I love haiku's and this is such a good one! -
Short, yet so powerful. I like this.
TD -
I likw this a lot..its like, look at me and find out who I am, get to know me and let me give myself to you but dont abuse me in the process..I dont know if thats what you were getting at but thats definatly what I got from it, it was a really great one, I usually dont like these but yours wase awesome. Great job!!!
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Much better, nice write. -Al
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can you try now?
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I can barely see this poem.
yellow words posted
on light brown marble or stone
strained eyes, surrender
-Al -
This qualifies as a good English haiku...I like the images!
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PS have a look at "My Wind, Your Eyes" written in same vain!
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good luck in the contest
This is very nice indeed. Thank you for sharing with us.Skinwalker -
I love haiku anyway but this is really good. I think you did a great write.
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Edited on Sep 08, 4:42 p.m. because ''.
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