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Mind blast

Vacuum cleaner
Blow my mind
Deep space free.

Drift in
Thistle light
Precise
Lithe
Clarity

Author notes

Maybe something to do with the sixties
Written September 7th, 2005

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  • grassisgreener
    August 29, 2006
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    You say so much in so few words. I guess I just love this piece right now because well, I really wouldn't mind having a vacuum cleaner suck all the bad thoughts out lol. For some reason, the odd wording you use is still easy for me to understand, and it makes the piece even more one-of-a-kind. Great job.


  • chills gold member
    September 10, 2005
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    very heavy thistledown

    Like the contrast between the clinical aggressive first three lines and the floating gentle clear last five. Good. x chilli