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For Barb

Thought you might like to know
You're not alone in your fears
This snap's of me on my hols...
Just look at those ears!

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Written September 7th, 2005

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  • ----michael----
    November 12, 2005
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    lol, yeah the ears are big but at least you have lost weight.


    THATS A JOKE! A JOKE I TELL YOU! YOU ARE GAWGUSS


  • Yusefeligirl
    September 11, 2005
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    A leg man eh? LOL!
    Thanks for popping in!
    K xx

  • Yusefeligirl
    September 11, 2005
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    Hmmmm... that's what I call positive thinking LOL!
    See you changed your name again.. have you nearly decided who you are?
    XX


  • silica silver member
    September 8, 2005
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    How strange!¡ I had always assumed you were African – but from those tiny, insignificant ears, it is clear you are Indian – but then I told you, you were no Dumbo… It does explain why your ex had that phobia about the threshold though…

    Aren’t ‘barbs’ those sharp little points that get under your skin and won’t come out¿?

  • swanpool
    September 8, 2005
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    Thanks for the giggle. But how did you get your hands on my holiday snaps! I thought I'd burnt all the ones of me. Very funny though.


  • Yusefeligirl
    September 7, 2005
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    Well-spotted Inky!
    Bottoms up, eh?! LOL!


  • Keith
    September 7, 2005
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    I'm willing to place a wee bet
    That this elephant will not forget
    This holiday spot
    She likes it a lot
    Plenty sunscreen, and no beads of sweat

    Every pachiderm deserves a break.


  • leo2
    September 7, 2005
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    I'll comment when I can breathe again. Laughing myself silly...Look at those legs..lol

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • spamwitch
    September 7, 2005
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    Awww, I actually really love the picture and I hope it brings a smile to your friends face the way it did mine, oh yeah,,I almost forgot, your poem rocked too.


  • Barb Davidson silver member
    September 7, 2005
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    Ha,ha but you can wear a hat and your ears have gorn away, mind you that bar stool you are sitting on will be painful tomorrow!


  • InkBlade
    September 7, 2005
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    Good choice of beer! Nice looking vacation spot as well. Is it a spa? (cute)


  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    September 7, 2005
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    You know? I'd actually be quite content to have elephant ears
    as long as they came without size ( of an effalump of course )
    since if'n my ears were twice my girth,
    just think of the way I could fly!!



    ~~Lisa/whims
    Edited on Sep 07, 7:15 p.m. because ''.

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