Your absent shadow,
Your silent fool,
My missing reason,
My excuse to fall again.
You don't know me,
You can't hurt me,
I don't know you,
I can love you.
Dark and innocent figure,
That's long grasped my attention,
You leave my questions unanswered,
Draw me in like the mystery you are.
I'll keep my distance,
From my heartache,
Keep my silence,
My safety net.
If you don't know me,
I can admire you,
If you and I never mix,
You'll never break me.
Author notes
random thoughts... I do know the dude, but not personally... still... *sigh*
Written September 7th, 2005
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I love it. These are the kinda poems that I would like to write, good ones, that still have alot of emotion in them. I hope to hear more of your work soon!
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Wow! You've exspressed it all so well!! I love it and it's so lucky that staring doesn't hurt!!
great write. Vxxx
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He is a dude and so's chris and staring doesnt hurt so its okay. Yay me happy youve found someone and did i say sorry?!
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no apology needed. Our thoughts do jump around alot so why wouldn't our writing? keep writing!
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This is very true... this is like my poem "What Would Happen If I Did???" Hahaha... guess who that written about! My poem I mean. This is nice, I really like it... and well... it's cute, he's cute.
Nice reasoning as well btw, as long as he doesn't come near you, you'll stay safe. Probably best way for it - though yearning doesn't really do much for the mind.
Laters kiddo xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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hee hee thanks for the comment, I do apologize for the jumping, its a random track of thoughts, a venting system! thansk for reading!
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hmmm very nice very emotoinal, jumped about quite abit but so do our thoughts. keep it up.
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