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Fall Colors (Haiku)

As Mother Nature
paints the leaves on all her trees;
Monet would be proud.

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Fall is comming
I just love watching the leaves change colors. Such a beautiful sight.
Written September 7th, 2005

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  • Kimojuno
    September 11, 2006
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    Insprirational and Heartwarming

    I don't usually read Haikus but for some reason I decided to read this one, I am not that famillar with the works of Monet, but I do like how you stated he would be proud. And I have to agree it is a beautiful sight to see when the leaves begin to change - quite a wonderful view for it and a great job. Keep it up.

    Oh and Clam Chowder usually warms me up when fall turns into winter..


  • SineDie
    October 27, 2005
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    festive

    This is a charming haiku. The words provde a vivd image for us readers I think it is just perfect for the season. the reference to Monet is quite creative.

  • skinwalker 2
    September 9, 2005
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    good luck in the contest

    I agree ~very well done and thanks for sharing with us.Skinwalker

  • FRIDAYatFIVE
    September 7, 2005
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    I love haiku's! this is fun to read, I like that you wrote Monet into it, he really would be proud...very well done.


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 7, 2005
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    Oh this is adorable. The thoughts of monet given a seal of approval to mother nature is just heartwarming. I too love fall....but I dread winter, which takes away some of the thrill of fall for me Well done my friend. '

    ~Lyrical
    Edited on Sep 07, 9:58 because ''.

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