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Rememeber?

Remember when you loved me?
...Back when you used to care.
When you spent every waking moment
Wishing I was there.
Remember the days
Spent lost in love,
And the feral nights
Under the stars above?
Remember when you said
"I'll love you forever"
And that "no matter what"
We'd "always be together"?

What did I do?
Where did we go wrong?
...I wish I could talk to you,
Its been so long!
Was it something I said
...Or something I did not?
Was it something I did?
...Or something I forgot?
 
You were my heart,
My soul, My truth,
You were my purpose,
My living proof.
Proof that love
Was real and strong.
That it could survive anything
...No matter what went wrong. 

Remember the day
You shattered my heart,
And recklessly tore
My world apart?
Remember when
You tossed me aside
...Caring less and less
With every tear I cried?

...

Remember when you said
"I'll love you forever"?

Author notes

i think it pretty much explains it all!
Written September 7th, 2005

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  • Subnetzero
    November 26, 2007
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    Hey what happened to you I haven't seen you in forever. I miss your writing.


  • synthetic
    December 15, 2005
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    Absolutely beautiful.

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