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Kiss me

A lost soul burns
A wandering moment of pain
Consumed by my own self torment
Obsorbed into my every being
And I relish in it
I drink my tears
Quenching my thirst for sorrow
Knowing no other world
Then that of my bloody pleasures
Sin drips from my tounge
I want to share it with you
Kiss me

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Written January 13th, 2003

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  • Honey18
    January 15, 2003
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    Wow! That has a great message, very niceeeee. I've felt that exact way before.


  • January 14, 2003
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    This poem has a certain erotisism, but this isn't the category I would've put it in, although I did enjoy reading it