Listen to the Wolfe’s choir,
the uncanny melody is a blessing
from Darkness; the Garments of Night…
Night; the exquisite veil of lovers;
haloed with a silvery crown
above the ground, hovering in the firmament…
Swiftly gallop with me the bright path of stars,
luminous flowers of fiery beauty.
while we meander in the Sky, the Garden of Night.
Comfort my lips with yours and dance;
dance with me to render the dawn weaker,
and renovate our night in an eternal night!
My embrace will be vast as the horizon,
between my arms you shall find infinite shelter,
enlightened by your mirroring eyes…
I refuse to be just human
and confined by destiny’s claws;
in your tenderness I shall find Godly might.
All while you whisper a lively breeze,
vowing in the Garden of Night,
singing with the Wolfe’s Choir.
Author notes
Written September 7th, 2005
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A contest entry
- ~Brit-Ta-Knees Contest!!!~ by bezs hummingbird.
300 points, ended December 6, 2005, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow! awesome poem! i really like it! thanks so much for entering! good luck! ~Brittany~
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AMAZING
Awesome! Your poem is very discriptive and creative. My favorite lines are
"I refuse to be just human
and confined by destiny’s claws;
in your tenderness I shall find Godly might.
All while you whisper a lively breeze,"
Great job. Thanks for sharing. -
my favourite part?
I refuse to be just human
and confined by destiny’s claws;
in your tenderness I shall find Godly might.
All while you whisper a lively breeze,
vowing in the Garden of Night,
singing with the Wolfe’s Choir.
i thoroughly enjoyed this. it took me away and i always like that... especially when i am at work, lol. (so, you get my applause for that).
the only thing that jarred fro me was 'crowned with a silvery crown' - i don't know i just wished you had used a differant word for the second part; halo, shard, light... i don't know
beautiful -
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agreed, now (years after, but time is meaningless) I changed it. Thanks
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i'm sorry but this is another one of those posts i can't read because of the coloration choices. I didn't want to waste your featured poem points without leaving comment, so if you change the colors let me know and I'll come back to this later. but please check the screen when you choose these colors. My eyes really do hurt at this point. thanks!
Jo -
Beautiful! I read it and fell in love! Most definately a poem I plan on forwarding to my mate. Gorgeous, gorgeous write! Bravo!
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MEEEP! this I like.Once again great work Joao.Beautiful work!
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