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Prologue: Death knocks twice

Side note: please leave constructive critisim and tell me i rock out loud This a a 4 saga story so please read if you like...may i remind you its a pretty gruesome story....but has romance in it ...dont worry..its allways nice to start with a scene to wrap the reader.... 14 and up please.. but if you can handle it feel free to read 




                  The crimson sky started to show sign of twilight.Blood from dantes sword dripped slowly on the brimstone grassland.The clouds bubbled with the sign of coming death."It'll be a cold day in hell when death claims me. But the clouds feed on your blood and so it shal rain it on your lifeless body." The warrior slumped held up by a broadsword.When he spoke blood slowly leaked from his mouth. His shattered breastplate laid in attered around his as he cluctched a gash in his chest."Damn...you *cough*...we will...*cough cough*..some day beat...*cough*..You cannot protect....*gurgle*...the underworld forever..."He spat blood on the ground and panted heavily as blood lay in waste sprouting around him,and slipping through his hand.Dante lifted the man by his throat and high off the ground,blood falling to the ground with glops."Tell you emperor, when hes dead and burried, and burning in hells gates, that he will never control this land of the undead, nor the demons and devils taht inhabit these lands.Your kind will be only wlecome as spirits of the dead." Dante raised The Sword Of Dead Kings,A massive blade strung to the hilt by the skulls of dead Kings of Orre.The eyes of the skulls suronding the hilt decorated with blood rubies and Gems posessed by powerful warriors.The blade a fang of the watchful pet Cerebus.The man laughed,torrents of blood gushing slowly from his throught as he laughed and spit it out."you demons plague us day and night scaring our young and slaying our old.
Now you must repent for your sins!"He pulled outa dagger of gold from his belt ,It blinded dante enough for it to perice his twilight armor of the moon.when it peirced his skin He knew of what metal the blade was tempered by.A halo had made that blade.only its holiness could cause such harm.It drove past his neck peice, and drove it into theneck of the demonic warrior.he drop the warrior after crushing his neck, and held his throat and threw the dagger to the ground. the violet blood seep out and gushed fluently.Dante jammed the sword into the ground causing shockwaves.The sword sealed forever untill its master claimed it once more.A few imp came out from behind soem rock hiding and carted off the corpse of Dante...the storming clouds gushed torrents of blood...



                         The palace gloomed with the eerie glow of the blue flame spirits flickering to the sway of music being played.Lord lucifer held a glass of bloodwine , and sipped in gently of the sweet nectar.
A pair of succubi laid on each leg and nestled close kissing him gently, fonding part of lower regions through the garments he wore.He smiled dimly,the hall was lifeless and dull and not even his favorite hereims could feed his lust for excitement.The gigantic door swung open and a lone goblin imp ran forth and was babbling soemthing incoherent aloud. A ox a of  amn pick him him up and listened for  few moments then tossed the goblin wiailing to lord lucifers feet. The ox of a man ran off. "Lord lucifer I have terrible terrible news.... The Great Shadow Knight Dante has fallen in battle."Dante spit out his wine and rose up knocking the women to the floor." You speak lies you imp , our hero would never die.you speak death to say." The Imp took out a sheathed dagger and opened it slightly.It grew golden yellow many shielded their eyes from the holy light. Unlike the following demons Lucifer was the Fallen Angel.He saw the glistening blood of The Shadow Devil. The scent of Dante."So he truly is dead."He raised the imp by the neck. "Show me this corpse of our dead hero." He tossed the imp twoards the door.He waved his herims off to his private chambers...He pick up a herald." You tell the land of our loss.Bring me the The sons of Dante they will have a special mission at hand. He tossed the herald out the door. He glided to the door and followed the imp hurriedly.


             Reno crossed his arms,His eyes trailing his immature little brother of 14. Who was just sent here after the loss of his mother on the homeland of the murdering men, the same men who killed his father."reno why are we going to see the lord of the land?Does he have candy?" The boy was sheltered at a young age cause no living human would ever allow a woman to live knowing she birthed a half breed and let it live. His childish nature was proof of his sheltering."Are we are we are we, i wnat candy i love candy candy candy candy!" Reno sighed. " no you little Twerp and if you keep bugging me im gonna put you in cerebus food dish." The brat stuck his togue out."Reno Why do you look like dad more then i do.?" They  rounded a corner into the inner sanctum." Cause your mother was a human and shes dead and youll find no sanctuary of mother here. Father was brave knight its good you kept some resemblence, or why father even let you come here." He could sense the young ones power probbly more pwerful then his own.... his mother slain for protecting her young and the human did manage to kill his father...thanks to the damn angels." Mommy allways said youd be the leading force in the army yep, yep. Have you ever seen a angel. Mommy says there the most beautiful creatures to ever soar the skys....and..." Reno riased the young one." listen Brat those angels killed our father! they our winged beats only born to kill us and our kind dont forget that a angel cannot be trusted.They will kill you sooner then look at you.Got it?" The teenage boy nodded and was let down." sorry kidd theres lessons in life you were sheltered form , but ill teach you all about them later.Now get ready were nearing The lords chambers." The young one walked slowly. "but...mommy siad...angels...but angels...killed daddy....mommy was my guardian angel....mommy killed daddy...why..."Reno open the doors...the boy was in shock at the facts...life was not an easy subject for anyone....reno knew it the hard way. He wnet inside and knelt as the boy looked aroudn in astonishment. Reno pushed the brat to the floor and pronounced himself." We are here to serve milord, I am Reno and this our new addition Izzy the halfbreed." Reno knelt his head to look as the lord ordered them to rise." Your Father was a terrible loss to us all, I would like to offer my extreme greivences. He was a loss to the kingdom i fear we might not be able to hold this war without him in our arsenal...we fear our war will fall,Should the matriarchs fall into the the ranks of the angels well lose this war to teh humans. So far they say they are neautral to the cause.But this peice of evidence say they are leading to wills of another sort."He drew a blade of golden light."Yes milord goko has told us of the cause and of what has happen. We only concern on how we can help, Especially the new recruit Izzy is not of combat abilities...a simple imp could school him."
Lucifer grinned evilly."He will be trained by my hand of deception, and warrior skills,and be my apprentice of the dark arts. He shall Be combat worthy within a wek and learn of the emotionless face of battle. You reno shall be in charge of riasing the armies...We will crush the angels before they assist the humans..." Reno knelt."As you will milord." Lucifer brushed his hand and reno left leaving young izzy to the hands of lucifer.


 

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Wow This one is fone for the darkness. If yu liked it please leave a note... its a story
Written September 6th, 2005

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  • Izzy Devil
    June 7, 2006
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    love

    I luff yew babya nd i kind agave up wirting i agve up a lot.. im so tired.. i need 2 talk 2 yew...


  • Mizuki wolf
    May 9, 2006
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    good

    Nice I like it though I'm a little curious what was that about anyways? lol Hope to talk to ya's soon peace.
    Always love, Heather


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 8, 2005
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    Interesting read. Not into this kind of story, but you have created a good tale here. Use spell check and currect some of the minor typos and it will be easier to read. Well done.

  • Jason Logan
    September 8, 2005
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    Incredible Work

    Holy shit, you rock out loud! lol
    No seriously this has great potential if it is given a great background. Aswesome job! I hope to see more l8er, ciao!