Asylum smiles!
Braggart host
Captive survivor
Dancer, ghost.
Evangelizer
Femur foe
Gross Undertaking
Hollow Hole
Impediments brew
Justification
Killers clue.
Lamentations!
Mannerism,
Notion tub,
Orbit color
Pedestal flub
Questions?
Rebuttals!
Asylum Smiles.
Author notes
Written September 6th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Be Included Or Be Left Out by emma leigh.
300 points, ended June 30, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie with a Twist III by MuddyKing.
475 points, ended July 20, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
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What did you think
Comments
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this is odd, but I like it
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Lol, well, odd would be my middle name, but my Mom didn't realize I would grow up to be this way
It actually made a very nice song which is equally odd 
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hahaha wooow! very clever and witty. from previous comments i gather this was originaly from a contest, but nonetheless it is still a very creative idea (whoever thought of it!). everything is so choppy yet it all seems to fit! good work, and good luck
thanks for entering
emma leigh -
This reminds me of watching soap operas... :| Particularly, a soap opera in the middle of some silly trial where the person is pleading insanity even though they are quite obviously fine.
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woah odd and trippy lyrics, I love it!!! I could totally see Qotsa doing this song. Rock On!
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Excellent poem! I remember this contest. I didn't enter because I didn't know they just had to stand alone as nouns. Everything I wrote, I kept saying, noun used as an adverb, noun used as a verb, noun used as an adjective, etc. I got so caught up in the editing I couldn't produce a thing. Thank you for clarifying this. You have done an outstanding job with this piece. It stands alone, as you put it, as a wonderful work of art even without knowing what the contest was about. Nice flow, amusing theme. Really good write. Thanks for sharing it. (It would make an interesting song) Sheryl
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i love it!! very nice..it's kinda satistic and wrong..but really nice..lol..cute..kinda..in a twisted way..good luck!
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Clever, clever.. well done. far to taxing for my brain
Barb -
lol! I love this piece! You have truly demonstrated how nouns can be so much more than 'just there'. Your rhyming stood out very much (in a good way), adding rhythm to the piece. And your vocabulary in this one!
Great job on this! Best of luck in the contest!
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Well done!!!
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I liked this alot and they were all nouns indeed! Everything matches accordingly and i love you use of nouns.
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