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Anticipation (Cinquain)












Waiting.


Inspired passion


Conjuring emotions


Best left buried deeply within;


Hoping.



Author notes

Written for the contest "Powerful Cinquains" by Lyrical Soul
Did not win.
Written September 6th, 2005

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  • Elrenia
    September 11, 2005
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    Actually, I did not mean to do it for that reason. I just do not like to see the poems smack up agains the top banner and the bottom disclaimer. I like them centrally place in their own space. But, you are right, it does add something.
    Thank you for reading and commenting.


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 11, 2005
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    I don't know if you meant to do this or not but all that space at the top of the page before the poem just kind of stressed the "waiting" in this piece. This made me think of the struggle inside when we won't what we can't or shouldn't have and we are just waiting and hoping for the right time. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck

    ~Lyrical