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Revenge

Revenge

R ender power on those of betrayal,
E nabling you to make it even,
V enomous emotions getting the better of your mind,
E ager to punish, repay the pain caused,
N ow, retaliation is at it's worst,
G ruelling work forcing those to repent,
E very bit of pain running through your head.

Revenge.

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Inspired by revenge movie Kill Bill.
Written September 6th, 2005

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  • zt
    November 16, 2005
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    You have a strange sense of humor k8. Heheheee... I'm not even sure what to make of this particular post of yours. ~smile~ But that's okay!