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Poison Lips

 

I carry a pain on my heart taht you have cause,
when you kiss me i feel prone to pause.
To think about your kiss means to mean,
and the lies you carry with thee.
Do you love me as you say you do,
let me know im still in love with you.
so when i taste you its not poison i take,
but the sweet love your heart can make.
I am in love thats is for sure,
its your heart that has my lure.
tell me youll stop these false hope,
remember the pain when my ehart hung from that rope.
Do you remember when you broke my heart in two,
do you remembe rthe manipulation you wnet through.
The suffering of lies you were fed,
beliving a  new man you were to wed.
I won you back and i wont lose you again,
I promised id never feel that heart snapping pain.
I trust you my love and decision you make,
but look down the path that you do take.
I trust you to do what you will,
i know you had enough pain for your fill.
I trust you to cmake decisions on your own,
I know you let our love be blown.
I kiss your lips once more,
but tehy taste diffrent from before.
Your lips taste taht of sweetness,
Your eyes look at  me full of lovingness.
Ill never lose you i know that is true,
i know our love will never be through.
so when i kiss you now on your straw berry lips,
looking into your eyes my hand on your hips.
I know the love i seek will allways be there,
and so Ill let you amke this decision for it is fair.
Dont let her control you its all i ask,
I trust you can complete this task...

Author notes

i made this from my heart...it hurst tow irte what i feel but amkes the pain slip away.i worry about my love and a girl who brought us pain.along with her deadbeat cousin...i just hope she...breaks my ehart again...
Written September 5th, 2005

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  • Mizuki wolf
    June 13, 2006
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    Good

    Hey don't worry I'm not going anywhere I promise. Though maybe off to college but that's about it. And what was with that Poison stuff ?????? I'm so confuzzeled. My head hurts. lol Oh well love ya lots peace out.

    Heather


  • Je Suis Prete
    September 5, 2005
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    Very good but the background made it really hard to read with the coloring you chose for the body of this piece. The bright green just doesn't work. Other than that...spectacular.
    Sara