She lays with her tortured soul
Awaiting the other to make her whole
the abuse has finally taken toll
changing her eyes to fierce and cold
no longer shy or quiet now oh so bold
hiding her feelings in between the fold
in her dress next to her heart
she's been this way since she lost part
of her soul in the depths of art
in the depths of the dream she had
that aggravated her and made her feel bad
for having to make you so sad
she awaits your apology
from your deep mohogany
eyes so deep inside and out
please don't you shout
she's gotta figure this one out
she can't keep running
she's gotta continue struggling
she's gotta start caring
appreciate the things He brings
you must praise Him and love Him
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Written September 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- anything goes contest by Desiree Darkk.
300 points, ended September 30, 2005, 121 entries
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A very moving piece...very nice, I have to say..I'm very impressed....keep up the great work..
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