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Shadows

Shadows
and the suns' rays
play close together in
harmony. Beckoning you to
join in.

Author notes

Just imagine sitting on your front porch,soaking up the sun
Written September 5th, 2005

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  • SineDie
    October 27, 2005
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    dashing

    The poems is simple but alluring like a flower. I love how you use different structures for your poems. I like writing cinquains myself and believe that you my dear are the better writer. The lines themselves bring up fond memories. Nicely done


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 11, 2005
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    I adore sitting on my front porch. I have one of those old country houses (built in 1892) and it has a front porch that extends the whole length of the front of the house. You described exactly what I feel when I sit out there in the evening. Well done and good luck in the contest.

    ~Lyrical