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Enthralled By You

I am drawn to you in lustful powers
That I cannot ignore or submit
Obsessions to the eclipse
I recreate for you a desire
Burning with fervor I kiss you
Wine-soaked in the rain I confess
My heart bleeds to allow you romance
For you are a goddess in the roses
Everything more and nothing less
And I am enthralled by you

Your beauty entices me into an enduring pain
As you are the one and only to the world
I am burning for you now
For the moonlight forms as a grey silhouette
No more sullen mantras
You are the only reason I mend my open vein
Otherwise, the mausoleum is where I will dwell
I love you too much
My blood-cold mist vanishes to reveal you
For I am enthralled by you

In flight for the new flaming night skies
I slit within the dusk of the shadowed midnight
And gild you with lust and desire
Come to me in your darkest hour
I am here for you forever
Dreaming of you in the cold fog
I lay within bloody roses with you
Waiting to close my eyes to hear your voice
Swaying among your love
As I am enthralled by you

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Written September 5th, 2005

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  • xXGuitarXx
    October 19, 2005
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    wow.......just gorgeous. i have no other words.....
    ~*Cammy*~


  • Exploit Stereotypes
    September 5, 2005
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    Wow...wow...This was so wonderful. I don't know what else to say. You write just like my boyfriend, especially that word mausoleum, which I still don't know what that means. Anyways, wow, that was a great poem!