and so you feel you've got it good,
the way every little boy should,
a girl in you're hand who comes when you call,
and catches you at every fall,
when you stumble, picks you up,
loves you tender, holds you close.
you've got your friends, and a closer one too,
he helps you out,or so you see,
that's the way he wants you to see it,
but you're blind, you're in love,
he's trying,but you're defying,
to split you and your girl apart.
because his life is so rosy,
so perfect and so true,
attention seeking bastard,
with nothing else to do
he sets out to wreck your life,
others and mine too,
and so little boy, you're world is lost,
your rose,she left you and now your alone,
she couldn't cope with all the shit she got,
from the razorblades of your best friend,
he caused it to end,and you run back to him,
everytime it will end grim when he is by your side,
so much in love, too blind to see
what he's doing to you,
and to me...
Author notes
this is slightly personal btw but i am not dumping my boyfriend before any one asks.its just feelings ok ? goood xx
Written September 5th, 2005
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yesyseyes
Eccelent rele excellent -
i supose. but i find it really hard to tell him things straight you know. its reli difficult. oh well. it'l work out somehow
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Awww hun that is really sad i know how you feel about this and how its hurting you. i really think you should talk to him, if hes true then he'll understand why its making you feel this way.
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Hey huni this is a reli kl poem.n i cn guess wot the true meaning is lol. xXxXx
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Wow... This poem is amazing! Overflowing with emotion and angst. Definitely a strong piece. Keep it up!
Aura
Rock on!
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