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Lost on Lever Street

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Love became lost
there, on the edge of the gutter
Lever street blue
& black eyes

The rakes, rascals and sinners
came to the Roadhouse
on the corner of Newton street
to hear her

Word got around
whispers above the back-beat
"She's here"
with shotgun smiles
rapid and fire-side
to side

Rocking-chair eyes
sway, seeking the length
of her skirts
Slip alongside her hips
to an inch of her
flesh

Oh, Angeline
how the angels lift a choir
for you
A pantoum of words
follow you
couplets of catastrophes
come to worship
you

And there she was
my platitude of petals
became lost in her womb-mouth-
blushed roses and simplicity
to hear her sing
one more time

And all the rivers
sweep forth at last
she climbed the stage
and the crowd sighed

I'm at the back
holding her coat-
tales of someone
soon
someone stealing away

Oh, heroin
of heroines and heroes
or somebodies whore
or drunk
prostitutes and the un-saved-
Oh Angeline
     save us






              save us all

Author notes

Musings with Angeline and the City  

and windy-one wrote a pantoum today .... and I just love that word.. pantoum..
Written September 5th, 2005

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  • Barb Davidson silver member
    September 7, 2005
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    Woman you just have the gift to dance a piece of poetry like a gyspy.

    Barb


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    Many thanks and glad you enjoyed it. ...


  • Kastor
    September 5, 2005
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    This is nice. I like the shotgun smiles, rocking chair eyes, and couplets of catastrophies come to worship you. This is so nice to read.


  • September 5, 2005
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    wonderful poem. it speaks to me of doomed and completely uncondicional love, and of obsession.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    yepp
    exactly.. what I meant.. is what I meant..

    thankie Mr Wocky..

  • jabberwocky
    September 5, 2005
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    pantoum? is that a feminine hygiene product?

    just sayin...

    Anywho, I really liked this one hun, it's got that certain "is that really what she meant" thing goin' on, enough to get the ol' juices goin, know what I mean? Keep writin' like that, and my muse is gonna fire bawdy limericks back at ya...

  • Esperanza
    September 5, 2005
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    This is a great poem. The description is great! There is a very deep and beautiful story being told in this poem. Great write!

  • BrokenheartandSoul
    September 5, 2005
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    wow, i love this.....one of my favorites on this site. You did wonerfully on it. Great job....keep up the god work, i would love to read more


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    Yuppp.. she is a siren, but she's quite beautiful, even when she drowns you


    and sighs back


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    wow...

    I'm clever.. lololol
    wayyyy too cool


  • jantastic gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    I caught the pantoum referene and it made me smile. This is delicious in its sensuality and its intrigue, she is a siren isn't she?
    I feel like sighing to day so here... sigh.


  • The Bear
    September 5, 2005
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    I like all the double meaning words you use here, they make intersting images. Stef says they are called homophones. It is very clever.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    I'll have to find somebody to write some then..


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    hhheheheh
    thankyou
    it's such a lovely word and windhover3's poem was so lovely.. had to pinch the word

  • darrylblacksr
    September 5, 2005
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    interesting poem

    Very interesting poem.

  • Lord Retherford
    September 5, 2005
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    well crafted

    THe lyrical nature works very well. Would lvoe to hear the music that accompanies the lyrics.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    September 5, 2005
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    wow... such explosive words... so many delectible descriptions my head is spinning here
    don't remember what a pantoum is and i should but i know damn good writing when i see it

  • what have i done
    September 5, 2005
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    beautiful poem. It had a real nice flow and the wording was perfect. amazing work
    -sarah

  • AntisocialSocialist
    September 5, 2005
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    It is a fun word, pantoum. This was quite an interesting poem.

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