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Tribute to Eslie...

Silently Alone
Dutifully working
Never a bitter face
Compassionately Helping

This is the one
That knows me heart and soul
That makes my broken day whole
That brings to me, a big bright smile

We have been here
Together now
The exact same time
Up to the day

I understand her well
And I see her pure heart
This truly is a woman
Of which to be proud

This is for you dear friend
Know you're noticed
Know you appreciated
And most of all....

          ....Know you're the best!

Author notes

This is written for a dear friend and collegue, Eslie. Hope you enjoy it girl!
Written September 5th, 2005

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  • IamtheDragon
    September 5, 2005
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    Brilliantly Beautiful

    Beautifull Merrigan truely beautifull


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 5, 2005
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    Beautiful tribute to somebody who obviously has touched your heart. I'm sure she will love your expressions of love, friendship and gratitude. Be Well my friend

  • Lacyte
    September 5, 2005
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    EXCELLENT

    This is indeed a lovely tribute to an obviously loved and valued friend and co-worker. Personally I think this is one of your best poems to date, Merrigan. Well done on a brilliant piece of work!


  • Storic
    September 5, 2005
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    lovely

    Oh what a most refreshing change this poem is! I do hope you show this to your friend, because you have obviously taken time over this poem, (and isn't time the most precious gift we can give?) and the sentiment isn't gushing or overdone.

    A quiet and lovely tribute to a friend. Well done and thank you for sharing.