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Empty Promises

A heart breaks with no tears left to cry.
A girl being broken down with time.
What will be left when they are through?
A hollow space where a human used to be?
She has nothing to believe in anymore.
Love has failed her for the last time.
What will it take for her soul to come back?
A miracle of God is all she can hope for now.
No one notices she no longer smiles.
And no one will notice when she's gone.
A broken heart is what it took for her to see,
And now she must move on.

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Written September 5th, 2005

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  • allianceofdefiance
    September 5, 2005
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    A heart breaks with no tears left to cry.
    A girl being broken down with time.

    these lines are cool. this is a great poem............good job