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i, love, you



i cant think of any thing that can make me smile like you
your the only person in the world not to make me blue
we hung in threw the thick and the thin
when we lay together your the only one to make me grin
my jokers smile is in full bloom
we joke about the day your gonna make me a groom
you'll always be my wife to be
even when these other girls come after me
you will always be the one of my dreams come true
this time i am giving thanks when there due

because we might fight like we are wed
but i take responsibility for every tear shed
most of them come out due to joy
then there was them times i wasn't coy
tears where shed because of my anger and hate
but i took it all in with my fate

my love still grow stronger each day
it flourishes in every way
even though at a distance i must stay
when we touched last sparks flew across my face
i could died a happy man that very place

you know we always got to make a joke
like when my took a hit then stopped to choke
but this all comes down to one thing i got to say
you got to take this in my clowning way
i fucking love you bitch

 

Author notes

haha ok this si for my ex i still love her she has stood by me threw every thing. we clown around all the time i still fucking love her.
Written September 5th, 2005

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  • September 6, 2005
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    sweet

    That was fucking awesome. I loved the ending. The rest of it was very emotional, but that had a very big twist to it cause of the way you said it rather than just Love you. You did a great job. I loved it.


  • September 5, 2005
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    love it alot

    awww this is soo sweet love poem lol:0I love the emotion and feeling you've given out a very wonderful write indeed keep on writing Mina

    P.S it would be great if you can enter our contest "Love poem/lyric" allpoetry.com/Contest/1482373