You ruined my pink dress
With the memories
You spilt on it
You stole from me
Took my childhood away
From between my little girl legs
You ruined me
With the dirt you forced in
My little girl body
I thought I was over you
Then I saw you again
And the pain is still there
It always will be
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I had been feeling happy, feeling good. Then this weekend...... I saw the waste of human DNA that raped me repeatly when I was seven. He talked to me, touch my hair, asked me why I was such an angry person. He made me feel dirty all over again. Why did he do that? I've always slept in the dark, but after this weekend.....I don't know if I'll ever feel safe. He took my childhood, the person I was suppose to be, he took so many things. And just as I think I'm starting to be okay....... Why does he keep taking things away from me?
Written September 4th, 2005
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This is a very powerful, amazing piece right here. I am truly sorry you had to go through that shit. But it's great that you can express these feelings throw poetry. I hope that man burns in hell also..Seriously. You have terrific talent. Never stop writing!
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I cant even begin to say how sorry I am that this happened to you, but I know my words are meaningless to you. I can only hope that there is justice in this world somehow..I hope you can continue to express your feelings and feel some sort of relief someday..and I hope he burns in hell.
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Whoa. This is powerful. I'm really sorry to hear about what happened to you. I hope that you are able to heal with time, because you don't deserve to have to suffer forever because HE is a sick bastard. I know it's something you'll never completely forget, but I hope you are able to get through and keep it from hurting you anymore than it already has.
The poem showed your anger, your sadness, your fear... I hope that all of the emotion you put into this made you feel a little bit better. The part about the pink dress really got to me, because it creates an image of this innocent child. There is definitely a lot of power in this piece.
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Honest and compelling
This poem will stay with me a long, long time. It makes me want to respond to you, to your pain. You are a good writer and able to express yourself very well. I've never had anything like that happen to me, but I feel what you feel and it gives me far more empathy! Thanks for sharing and I pray you will find peace and healing. Don't give him more than he took. You are a beautiful person!!! -
Excellent and Heartfelt
Wow, this is so powerful and sad. I feel terrible that you had to go through a horrible experience like that. And how rude of him to come and talk to you like nothing is wrong. You poor girl. I hope this makes you stronger. Your a brillant writer. Keep it up. Peace -
I love it, my darling. But, who is this person that hurt you? Was it really rape? If it was, rather then just writting poetry ( you still should anyways, just to vent stuff out), go out and get help. Tell some loved ones. Just be careful of who you tell, tell the ones you trust. If you can't, then just give it time. Only time will heal all wounds. When the time comes, you will know exactly what to do, or say. n_n<3
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great job
This is really touching, It is horrible that you had to go thru that at such a young age. Well its horrible that you had to go thru that to begin with. I am so sorry and I hope that you can get over him and get over that lingering effect. I wish you nothing but luck. great way to vent your frustrations.
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