Silken shadows,
Of waving palms,
A hush of sound,
A touch of dawn,
A ship at sail,
On waters deep,
Divers search,
Secrets to keep,
Oh silken lady,
Gentle host,
She is easy angered,
When ask to give up her ghosts,
Fight breaks out,
For sunken gold,
Sand runs red,
Story won't be told,
But the lady,
Has her own game of play,
Brings up secrets,
From chilly grave.
Author notes
( jessie is a sexy beotch )i like ducks
Written November 13th, 2001
A contest entry
- anything... by MmmCoffee.
300 points, ended October 11, 2004, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time For You To Take A Chance ~ Round One by Tears and Raine.
320 points, ended January 26, 2008, 176 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you didnt follow the rules, but i am feeling generous...
your poem will go onto final judging -
great job
really good i liked the decreptivness and the way it feels liek you can actually picture it in you mind -
oh that was haunting
and the images
were beautiful
dark and heavy!
i enjoyed this
thanks
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awesome piece.
thanx so much for sharing. -
'She is easy angered,
When ask to give up her ghosts' Those to lines are divine. Wonderful poem. -
chilling
excellent write
incredible -
I won't touch it G-man but after rereading it ..I believe you are right.
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Superb natural flow, construction. Final type edits needed (i.e., Story never to be told...or, Story forever untold...whatever...) All-in-all...terrific. G-man767
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Oh I like this.. well done..
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wow, (smoothing down the chill bumps) incredible! i'm gonna put you in my favorites!
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chilling.. very good word for this. You are very talented.
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Simply Chilling
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