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Rejoice

                         as of now we cry
                 not knowing what later brings 
                        now angels will sing

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Losing a loved one can be hard but as long as you keep faith all will be well.
Written September 4th, 2005

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  • shubs
    September 17, 2005
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    The hope you foster is for all of us to cherish,losing someone and seeing that person perish is the saddest thing on earth....Shubs


  • DanyulDEATH
    September 5, 2005
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    Hmm, I must say this is brillant for a haikus, and I love it! Great Job! Tragical-Overdose

  • Libra Moon
    September 4, 2005
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    Traditional haikus are supposed to be about nature, this one is spiritual/philosophical.