Conjuring up streaks of light
swirling around the night sky
twilight befalls the heavens
God's creation is rising high
Oh harvest moon keep waxing
shine down and make me smile
loving him weighted my heart
no longer hidden or in denial
Rising into the heavenly night
stay with me until the morn
as the harvest moon disappear
the dawn of a new day is born
Shining like a beacon of light
showing the way for me to see
hanging in suspended animation
let my captured heart go free
The moon is just a doorway
leading to another endless day
as it sinks beyond the mountain
another sunrise is on the way
Author notes
I read your poem Telling You
Written September 4th, 2005
In a list
What did you think
Comments
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Nice poem, very descriptive. Sounds like a canvas paintings. Good luck.
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Pretty
Wow! That's a beautiful poem. I like the layout and flow. The fourth stanza is my favourite.
Goodluck in the contest!
Best wishes,
Charishma -
Woo-hoo that was a beautiful poem. I think I like this one the best. Particularly the hope in the fourth stanze. Well done. Michael.




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