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Desiring Lost Souls

Darkness creeps over me like wind on water
Bloods flow inside my veins and you cry
Spine to the grave I scent your sullen desires
Roses burn in the shadows arising
Raping the virgin souls of angels I die
Silhouetting the darkness like crimson blood
Feel the touch of a spine-chill and fear
Lost in sullen hatred killing fervor and runes
The barless prison is metamorphasizing a blood-cold chill
Calm the storms of another lover
Raining down tears and blood of a burning rose
Seething the lust in caverns of the unholy
Bathing in moonlight and reddening camphor
As the oceanic waves of addictions grow colder
Rotting in the neon glow of passing rites
Mausoleums close and fog out the damn mist
Breathing the death of a grimm malice
Avenging the death of your lover in the wine-soaked rain
Given into the midnight wine and more
Desiring for yourself the lost souls
For tonight is my last deathwish

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Written September 4th, 2005

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  • SixtySevenMustang
    September 4, 2005
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    I don't really know what to say!
    I just really like it!
    It was well put together!
    Great write!


  • TrulyAnAngel
    September 4, 2005
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    Hey Now Easy On The Angels
    Really Spooky....Descriptive All The Way Through!
    My Favorite Kind Of Write I Was Born On Halloween & Love Fall & Spooooky Movies, Terrific Write
    Thank You For Sharing It
    Angel


  • starlight--x
    September 4, 2005
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    I really liked this. I like the complex writing in it and think it's an excellent piece of work!
    Love Aimee - xx -