When you went away,
your love for me,
became obvious
shortly afterwards…
My love for you,
also remained
as it was…
I also know
that It will never again
be returned,
in the way I wish it to be…
I never wanted to say,
some things that I now feel
that I must.
One thing I must say,
is I will move on with my life,
without you
as you would have it.
As you sacrificed yourself for me,
to find love again,
to find happiness again…
Even though,
I now realize,
my love for you,
will fade in time…
I must release you,
from my heart,
for I cannot move on,
still in love with you…
I know, if it’s possible,
that you will help me
through the tough times,
to come…
But still,
I must release
my love for you,
for I wish to love another,
as I loved you…
So I must say, now,
I release my love for you,
I don’t want to,
but I must…
There is something else
I wish to say now,
it is something else,
I never wished to say…
Something I never had the opportunity to say,
so I must say it now…
Goodbye,
my love…
I will see you again one day…
Goodbye…
© Jonathan Wikkins November 13th, 2001
Revised February 10, 2008
All Rights Reserved
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Written November 13th, 2001
Revised February 10, 2008
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this is agood poem and i feel the heart here
this is agood write
thank you for entering!!
**kat -
excellent write here you have hoeny . this was really grand indeed thank you for shareing it
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very sad, but beautiful
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*Wipes tear from eye* This was great in a sorrowful kind of way.
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Very sad.. you have such a talent for writing emotion.
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Sad
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Cries BIG DROPS OF TEARS.
i can relate to this poem..
Sad part is, I know i won't ever see him again...
*ever* but sometimes fate, is supposed to be that way.
No matter how good it felt at some points,
sometimes it felt ebtter then it should.
Then things change, feelings change. And they can never be changed back, Because the heart. But maybe in the near future you will find someone that feels that empty slot. and solves your problems,
Shelly. -
I am actually weeping....my heart is in my throat, and the tears are falling freely....my heart actually hurts....
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Oh this was so sad....You put thought and emotions down in pen beautifully.......Great write......Smiles your way :o)>>>>>>Sandy/San-d
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wao you made me cry ,it feels like you were leaving me
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Oh my... so heart felt....
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Sad Poem... I dont know what else to say, very good
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So sad...truly touching.
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