It's a moonless night the
moon's beam usually lights my path.
The air seems thick and dry.
The feeling of death is all around.
It surrounds me suffocates me
wherever I stand.
The dark was silent for there was
no sound of any kind.
As I stood there all-alone
too petrified to move.
There is an overwhelming sensation
it tingles throughout my whole entire body.
Do I run? Shall I shout? I will not.
I won't even utter a sound.
I can feel his presences it's the mysterious one,
the one I call my love of darkness’
I feel his spirit twirling and
swirling inside me.
My heart beats faster, my blood pumps;
circulating throughout my entire body.
I am ready for my lovers kiss the piercing
of two sharp fangs upon my neck.
For I am the thirst my love
of darkness craves.
My blood wine is the warmth that
replenishes his immortal soul.
So he may walk the shadows
of the dark; in human form.
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was for contest hosted by midnight dove
Written September 4th, 2005
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Thanks for commenting..God bless, Brenda
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wow i really loved this poem its great the way you set it up loved it
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Oh wow brenda this poem goes so well with the picture! Awesome poem it felt as if I was she.......ahhhh. Thank you for your entry hun
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THIS IS AWESOME!!! I LOVE Vampires, and I love the way you portrayed him! And the way you portrayed his bite as a kiss is something I do...there's a book that's REALLY good called "The Silver Kiss" that you might like. Wonderful write! Please be safe, God bless you!
~ ~ Courtney ~ ~
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Oh my, truly a beautiful write. I love it. It is all the things a dark piece is and should be. I must admit probably the best dark write I have read on this site. I absolutley love it. Definitly a favorite. I am bookmarking this for future read.
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I like it a lot. There is an eerie sensation in this beautiful flow. I especially loved the phrase
"I am ready for my lovers kiss the piercing
of two sharp fangs upon my neck. "
Great Write.
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