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love is silly

love......
love is silly thing some times
you never know in love what you are going to  find
as years dating it can be full agony sadness or bring a girl's dream come true
but in my love life its always seem to be blue
brought thoughts of what should i do?
agony and pain seem regular thing in my love life
until one day i met this aw some guy
my heart was already torn and thoughts of my self weren't nice
until he show up things started to changed
my days with him made some sad thoughts go away
and my bad thoughts of love seem to fade
and it was hard say i love u once again
but know as i fall deeply for this guy my philosophy love is wrong and i thank love for happiness it did

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this about my philolosphy of love is
Written September 4th, 2005

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  • September 27, 2005
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    Excellente

    well, at least it gives me (a guy) a girls perspective on how love seems to be handled....I like your poem, if I just reverse a few words, I could connect it with my love life , well, that tells how much I like it doesn't it

  • brokenangel12
    September 17, 2005
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    hey thank u for your comment and i put u on my favoritve so i can read all your poems i really love ur poems

  • RomeoTheVamp
    September 12, 2005
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    Great write and full of great thoughts, anyway
    later
    RomeoTheVamp

  • fairyprincess22
    September 4, 2005
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    Good work

    Charity,
    This si areal beautiful poem.
    I like it.
    You are also a great poet yourself.
    Keep up the good words.
    Love you.
    Salina