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The Me You Are Afraid Of

 

 

 

 

 

I walk the straight and narrow
in complete self-righteous psychosis
through the valley of your death
I come with sword unsheathed
and I say,

 

Go fuck your marijuana,
stick your crack up you ass.
You want cheap sex,
here’s a splintered broomstick
to stick up your ass.
You’re probably fucking Euro socialist scum
sucking off my productive ass
for your next filthy needle
that you will stick into my back.
As I pass through your valley of death
I am not unscathed,
in fact I’m pretty ragged,
and now I’m pretty fucking pissed.

 

What do I have to lose?
Nothing.
I am not accepted
by the true straight and narrow
because I’ve been tainted
by your fucking valley of death.
So I am free to come back
and deal with fucking scum like you
who have made my life such hell!

 

So why don’t I?
My aim is very bad
and there are still
a few good people around
that you hide behind
who would get hurt

as you go about
being the dirt bag worm that you are.

 

So I’m just waiting
for the next anarchists
to take over
so I can begin my vengeance legally.

 

Now I see why
I am too scary
for true straight and narrow-
I walk the straight and narrow
through the valley of your death.

 

 

Author notes

random!
and not aimed at anyone I care about... (lie)
and just know, this is not all of me, thank God!
Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • Glasyalabolas
    September 28, 2007

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    Very well written angry vent. Sometimes it's just good to shoot aimlessly and see what pieces of our annoyance we've mortally wounded.

    Good write and congrats on gold.


  • Porcelain Doll
    September 5, 2005
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    First* o.O yeh...

  • Porcelain Doll
    September 5, 2005
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    Dirst of all... I wouldn't be being a good little editor if I didn't point this out.

    "Go fuck your marijuana,
    stick your crack up you ass." Your.

    And with that task accomplished...

    This is wonderful! Gah... I'm not accustomed to reading poetry that's this... raw and...real. You Told it how you felt it, and goddamn can I ever relate. If it weren't for that crap I might have my damn parents and be living some semblance of a normal life now. Thanks for echoing my opinions when I couldn't... hugs tightly Take care hun... I'm sorry I've missed your poetry... I've been on a leave of absence to clear my mind -_-
    Alot of crap's beeing going on and nyeh.... but anyway, wonderful poem. I love this, and thank you. Love ya
    ~Amy


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 4, 2005
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    I do believe all of the things you mentioned apply Sweetie! And I did come back and fix my typos. I don't want people to think you have a loopy Mum.


  • wbiro gold member
    September 4, 2005
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    Well, my much adored mum, by your several typo's I will pretend that this piece either affected you strongly and has you very concerned for my mental health, or you are simply overtired! lol I don't know if this piece is ambiguous or not, since I state that I know my psychosis...

  • wbiro gold member
    September 4, 2005
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    thanks, Mr. Grant- teasing my psychotic straight and narrow with your drink, eh? lol Tool? No, a few generations after me perhaps! But thanks for the note!

  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 4, 2005
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    What is it they say... if you don't stand for something, you will fall for anything. I have never fretted about the things those around me choose to take a stand for or against. In most cases, I admire the fact that people do feel passionate about something. We are all entitled to our beliefs, although admittedly, some make more sense than others when you consider all the facts. We all want to think we are invincible and we are the exception... Blip!! That's a big false sense of security!! There's nothing wrong in feeling as you do sweetie.
    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¤ ¸.•'´)¸.•'´)
    ~~~Touchof1der~~~
    (, .•'(¸.•'´ ¤ `'•.¸)`'•.¸)

    Edited on Sep 04, 3:52 p.m. because ''.

  • jonathan-s-grant
    September 4, 2005
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    pure awesomeness!

    i enjoy the raw emotion here. . .you seem to be feeling ostrasized (sp?) at the moment. at any rate, i dig your philosophy here, and i'll drink to that.

    also, if you've ever heard of the group Tool and their song " aenimia " lyrics, this really made me feel a sense of deja vu here in what some of the lyrics describe.

    i really enjoyed this angst-filled piece. . .i will have to read more of your works, this isn't as critics would describe as polish. . .bollacks to them! i've enjoyed this as is. . .and i feel the majority of the world would as well. and that's what counts!


  • FallingSideways silver member
    September 3, 2005
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    I had to come back again as I am truly amazed by how much you poured forth into this
    Now I know why you are my dad...
    Same feisty blood
    ~me

  • FallingSideways silver member
    September 3, 2005
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    WOW... I must say you have said it quite well at that!!!
    You get my standing ovation and a HUG
    Seriously though, I am sorry for obvious turmoil and strain you may be experiencing..
    Just know a good friend helps to bury the bodies
    ~much luvin'~

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