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Emotions

The look in her eyes
Filled with betrayal and hurt
Before walking out.

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Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • bookworm987
    October 11, 2005
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    good

    heyy, ur nicoles friend, rite? me 2, well you are a good writer, especially this one, it's really good and meaningful. comment back on some of mine.

  • hybridXhunnie
    September 24, 2005
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    awe : (