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Poetry Just Is...

Poetry just is...
Poetry is the colour of emotions;
the angriest red, most envious green,
the saddest blue, and the happiest yellow
Poetry feels like making
snow angels in your swim suit
Poetry smells crisp and clean
like the first day of spring
To taste poetry is to
combine sweet, sour, salt and hot
all into one
Poetry is nothing, poetry is everything,
poetry is everywhere
Poetry just is...

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By crazymomma a poem about poetry hmm...

I vote for "A Fine Vintage"

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  • piccola silver member
    August 8, 2008

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    congrats on the trophies. Not satisfied until you get gold, eh? This aptly describes poetry. Fine job and thank you for entering the contest.


  • Hetha gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    You've really described poetry quite well in your piece. I can see why it has won so many lovely shinies. Thank you for gracing this contest with such a beauty.


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 25, 2008
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    ooooh...this is an extremely interesting poem...I love the concepts you give poetry in your writing. something that's so hard to describe really, you've done so well....it sounds like something that should be put into the front of every book of poetry....Well written!
    Thanks for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • nilav
    July 9, 2008
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    you have defined the undefinable adding color to it....congrats on the trophy...


  • peridotPixi
    July 8, 2008

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    Thank you for the beautiful entry to my contest,
    I love how you say so much about poetry in a wonderful way,
    I love the details you have used to describe poetry so well I love the way you say that poetry is the sweet, sour, salt and hot combined into one, congratulations on the 3 previous HMs and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • SoftlyScreaming
    June 24, 2008

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    this was very different.. what i like most about this poem is that when you contrast the difference in itself it still makes sense and acctually goes together.. i like this poem, thanks for entering and good luck.


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 7, 2008

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    You did a realy nice job with this and I agree with you ( Poetry Just Is.) and thats the way it should be. Thank you for your entry, and good luck in the contest.


  • GossamerAlice
    May 27, 2008

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    This is so good!
    Very short and simple but beautiful!
    Thank you for your entry! I really enjoyed it ^-^


  • Angelflower
    May 26, 2008

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    this was so wonderful!!!
    It was just so sweet
    and the imagery was so vivid!!!
    I'm speechless really..
    Bravo!!!
    Best of luck!!

    Angel


  • David. Enjoy.
    May 21, 2008

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    This was an amazing read, personally. Mostly because I connect so well with light and colors. Your sprint through sensory words is exciting and your view of poetry as freeform beauty is really quite inspiring. Universal and sincere. I don't want this to sound rude at all, but the poem's real strength is in it's sort of basic vocabulary which removes the focus from the literal word and moves the reader's mind to introspection and symbols.

    This is really nice. I'll try the snow-angel thing some time.


  • rainbow bi trinity
    May 21, 2008

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    like this i think you did a nice job penning your feelings good luck to you in the contest

    xoxo trin xoxo

  • Deadmans Heart
    May 7, 2008
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    I never really thought about what poetry is like that, what an interesting write


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    The colors of poetic emotion, lovely write hun, thanks for the great entry. Hugs, Bunny


  • jamiedoring
    May 6, 2008

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    Beautiful....

    This is a perfect poem. I LOVE it and keep coming back to read it.... Your wording and images are simply beautiful. EXCELLENT!


  • Supa Fox
    May 5, 2008

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    I like this a lot. The message gave me something to think about. I never really thought about what poetry really is, and this poem inspired me. Great description of the uniqueness of poetry ^.^


  • LadyUnique silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    i enjoyed this it was a fun read and a true one too. poetry/writing has so many faces and they are all magic to me. colors too. i like how you've included them


  • Legend silver member
    May 1, 2008

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    A poets poem I am sure every poet knows and understands the feelings one gets when reading,writing.or just thinking of poetry Excellent


  • TabbyCat
    April 25, 2008
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    Holy crap! Snow angels in my swim suit? I'd die...not enough insulation on this little lady!!!!


  • Charity Ann
    April 22, 2008

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    I like this one. I like all the comparisons and the imagery you use. I especially liked how you compare poetry to many different tastes all in one. This is a very creative write. Good luck in the contest.

  • celadia
    April 22, 2008
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    This poem is very unique and a great premise.


  • Image and Visions silver member
    October 29, 2005
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    Crasy, nice write you have here, thank you for describing your taste of colors to me.and thank you for entering my little contest. best of luck to you. Please don't forget the requirements. image and Visions


  • BabyxBadger
    September 8, 2005
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    Hey sorry I dnno if I wanrned you- I forget to check a few but can you please look back through my rules and put what I asked you to put-just to see who was serious bout this comp and who was not-it's easiest to know who would be the best winner. I really don't wnna disqualify you so please will you do this-merci sweetie x
    Luv Lou
    :0)


  • September 5, 2005
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    This is amazing! I havent heard of a poem about poetry yet..... or is there one? Oh well, that was awsome! Poetry really brings out how people feel, and when you write about your feelings, you feel better about them

  • BabyxBadger
    September 4, 2005
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    Awww thanx hunnie x Lovley poem-totally gorgeous with all the senses etc in it-really wow u explained it so well. Good luck in the contest and with everything in your happy little life (please have a happy life-tis fun :0) soz a tad hyper...) Merci beaucoup x
    Luv Lou
    :0)

  • amateurpoetess
    September 4, 2005
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    Refreshing

    Well dear poet, that just about covers it. Every taste and emotion the pen can paint, goes down to reflect something one said. Beautiful flow and explanation, as I beleive, also, the poetry -- just is.


  • galfalfa gold member
    September 4, 2005
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    Snow angels in your swimsuit (brrr) ..how about sand angels in your snow suit What a great imagination...poetry is that special place that lives inside us all
    Enjoyed this!


  • 5th position Gb
    September 4, 2005
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    That was nice. I like it when people write poems about writing poetry. It amuses me. This definitely expressed what poetry is. Great job!


  • abc123uandme
    September 4, 2005
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    Good job, great images.


  • Hawk Feather
    September 4, 2005
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    A poem about poetry. LOL This poem had me thinking about how I write, about what I write, and about poetry itself. The imagery is great! You really have a way with words. I don't know if I could ever express the meaning of something like poetry so vividly. "Poetry is nothing, poetry is everything" was my favorite part of this piece. Best of wishes to you in this contest, and keep up the great work! Bravo!


  • obsidianrose843
    September 4, 2005
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    This was a wonderful piece. For once I actually understand what someone is saying. Poetry is... the soul, sketched out on paper. I would applaud you but I'm all out for the day. Again, this was a great poem and I love every line of it.
    - the obsidian rose


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    September 4, 2005
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    Very nice piece. -Al


  • crazymomma
    September 4, 2005
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    A black rose to show my love to you


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 3, 2005
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    poetry is a way of expressing, this is a lovely piece

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