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there's music in the background
and pleasure in the letdown

 

there's everything and nothing in the strum of a guitar

 

there's beauty in the madness
sweet chaos in the sadness

 

all hail the flip, the switch, the turn of phrase
the sleight of hand
the trick of eye that rolls the sun

 

the tigers die in asia
and languish in the zoo

 

and in south africa they grind
diamonds, which like humankind

 

are flawed but can be cut to spark
with flash to hide the impure dark

 

so cover up your darker flaws
with show of teeth and snap of jaws

 

they'll never have to push if they can make you long to jump

 

and love the one who, with a wink
can trip your mind before you think

 

but love is blind, and blind is weak
so go, love hard, but 'ere you speak

 

know heartbreak is death's younger sister
speak not of love above a whisper

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any suggestions for a title would be much appreciated
Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • noprobabilty7
    September 3, 2005
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    this is really cool. i like it a lot...while sad in some ways i understand where ur coming from and i know it totally sucks. im me sometime if u want. great work.
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