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Gilded Souls

Forever I mourn your passing in the dusk
I am sullen in lost despair over you
For you were everything to me
And I love you into the shadow
Gilded souls are rising
And for the gaps of suffering
Eternal is my untold hate for my heart
Of the roamnce that I wept for in roses
Sweet divinity cavern that I miss
I will avenge thy wrath
Gilded souls are rising
And for the clasp of pain
Writhing in the heated fog
I rise to the decaying of a love rose in the night
Seeing the hauntings of your romanced corpse
For the moonlight obeys the mausoleum
Dawning on the centurion of the caressed
Gilded souls are fading
And the mask of the agony
I shall fall before the order of the spaced
Blood-cold in the veins of redemption
I am the overseer for the roamance that fades
I love you with all thine heart and soul
Gilded souls are weeping
And the fading of all gilded souls

Author notes

I wrote this poem while thinking, or despairing, a dream I once had. In this nightmare, the one woman that I loved died and even upon awakening, I never was the same. So I wrote this poem for her. A little morbid and sullen, but I think it is poem you'll enjoy.
Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • Katerina Ivanovna
    September 4, 2005
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    Interesting. A poem after a dream, a dream that left you changed. Interesting write, and good job.