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In Silence

You came into my likfe
Quietly, simply, placidly
And my words stood stil...

I couldn't express in words
Or even in simple gestures
The secret I kept in my heart

So I love in silence,
Admired you from a distance
Dreamt of you from afar

I wanted to say I love you...
I wanted to say I care...
But cowardly, maybe you'll only laugh at me.

In silence then I will love you...
In silence then I will care...

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Written April 9th, 2005

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  • Ms Tinkerbell
    September 3, 2005
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    Ah honey please tell this person, thats so sad that you have all this emotion but cant let it go. Ive been there myself but it does you no good to hide it all. So what if they dont fel the same way or laugh at least they will know and then you can feel better and know at least you had a shot !! That said and done I loved reading this it was so well thought out. Great write, Tinker xx