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In Love

This feeling overwhelms me
A swelling of the heart
I never thought I would be
This happy at the start

You take me by the hand
And lead me by the heart
Over a beach of sand
Through the grasses that we part

With you I let go
Of intution and sound mind
My feelings I cannot help but show
To someone who is so kind

You look at me so softly
And embrace me through the night
To you I have surrendered myself,
So hold on tight

So strongly you hold my hand
Whisper softly in my ear
I really feel you understand
Everything you hear

I lose myself in you
This close I've never been
These feelings are so new

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Written May 22nd, 1999

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  • SouthernBelle09
    September 3, 2005
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    this is really sweet! i loved it,its well written,and the emotions were beautiful,ive felt this way only once in my life,and luckily still do,anyway great write,you did a goodjob with this ~Laura