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Tears Of Shadows

As the tears trickle down to the heartbeat of it's lover
The threshold of silhouettes hold applications defied
But the unholiness creeps up behind the forsaken
And is held with high regard to the darkness
The forgotten eats at the metallic blood of the lover
Seduced by the raping angel of demons
I possess a confession to the rue of mist
And more, I love her
Forever, I lover her
The descending angels open their legs to rape the demons
Fighting within her soul they both lose
She loses
Death is her
The moonrise sets down to a calm storm and embracing
The silence is being awaken by the gates and the Depths

Awaken my child
And gaze at the sky
Awaken by the dawn
And embrace the night
I'll see you at my Utopia
And forever lost in lust
I die
I love her

Author notes

I do not know how I wrote this. It kind of slipped out of me, I guess. I hope you enjoy it...
Written September 3rd, 2005

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  • Micah Young
    September 10, 2005
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    I have to say you are completly amazing this work is unbelieveable! i really enjoyed the beginning expecially!


  • B0n3z
    September 5, 2005
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    kudos! so deep

    speechless...so meaningfull! so deep!! Im in awe!

  • coolcat13
    September 3, 2005
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    WOW!

    wow!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! this is so deep...after i read it i was speechless...it wowed me...