As the blood flows to create a flood
I silhouette the romance we once had
For the sullen magick is killing me
Live on is what I hear in the whispers
But the arrogance of life loves on
So come to me for I love thee
And no more moons do I awake the dusk
Crashing down the nightskies and a scorning
Feel the presence of wine and blood
So that I may feel your misty-cold soul
Rechristened is my soul and the angelic raping
Of another love in the blood-cold rain
Steams of collaboration dawns upon my lover
You are my reason to live
I was born to be in love with you
I eat out your veins with fervorous love
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Written September 3rd, 2005
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Edited on Sep 03, 11:51 p.m. because ''. -
This is very nicely done. The flow of this write is incredible i think. I did notice that oyu have a spelling error ( like I am one to talk):
I was born to be i love with you
was it meant to be this way or was it supposed to be:
I was born to be in love with you
The pain of losing a love, one that is cherished, is horrid. I am facing that now. I have the most incredible man in my life... but we are not together and it breaks me day by day. Poeple say that time heals all wounds, but what happens when time makes the wound worse? I wish I knew the answer to escape the pain. Very nicely done and Godd luck to you in the contest! Remember to complete all rules, it would tear me up to DQ this write.
-Tamara
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